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*****
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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disgusting (eww)i hate you can't you see,you remmind me of a whore beaten with an ugly stick(laughing)yep thats you we used to be good friends but now all you do is follow that trend(PREP!) take a shower,than maybe you'll smell like a flower,probably a dead flower
*****,you make me hurl you live in a dream-world you think you're so cute with that pearl but ***** you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?
think back to about a year ago do you remember how days were now you're hanging out with her can you see what i show
you think you're so perfect maybe you are,but never will you be perfect in my big brown eyes
you're so cruel,the way you go out that door each morning,don't you realize people don't wanna see? *****,you make me hurl you live in a dream-world you think you're so cute with that pearl but ***** you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?
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Re: *****
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:58:22 PM AEST (User
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when i saw this was in the friendship section i assumed it would have been about a hrm friendship that was going well. well its nice to know i cannot assume to save my life.
interesting and filled with anger. i felt you could have made this better, but everything in life can be made better. the moderators love you rodney =] |
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