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Are You Happy Now
Contributed by
AliaAnn15
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:47:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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How does it feel
To Know that this is real
To know that you played a part
In what broke my heart
Does it satisfy you
To know what you do
Tore me to the ground
When no one was around
Is it pleasing
To know your teasing
Ripped me from joy
Thrown out like a broken toy
Did you know
Ive been as cold as snow
But Ive put on a happy face
Trying to get out of this place
Do you get it now
Can you see it now
That you caused my death
With your hatefull icy breath
How does it feel
To know this is real
Im falling apart
Because of your lack of heart
But guess what
The door is shut
Its too late now
You cant save me now
And you cant change things now
Im laughing at you now
As I end it now
Are you happy now
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Re: Are You Happy Now
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:25:45 PM AEST
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Well, I certainly pray this is jus venting.
I know those thoughts-n-feelings but I wouldn't give any of my ex's the privialge to know they 'caused me to take my own life. Sure it hurt but if if I died then that would mean they won and even tho I wanted to give up I kept going.
Great writing even tho very sad.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace, joy,
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Re: Are You Happy Now
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:56:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write. much emotion shown in this. you just used now way too much in the last part of this. |
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