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FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
Contributed by
Alina
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:43:43 PM in AEST
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" FATHER DEAREST PLEASE ".......
He has such a disease
One that pollutes his mind
And kills his daughter every time.
" DADDY PRECIOUS PLEASE " .......
Is all rotten to the core
To raise his daughter the wrong way
Made her a ************ whore.
" FATHER, DADDY PLEASE ".......
Knew not where his *********belonged
Stuck it into many places
And smokin from the bong.
" FATHER DEAREST PLEASE " .......
Made his daughter rotten in her head
She continued to grow older
Left her in his bed.
" DADDY PRECIOUS PLEASE ".......
Had a great disease
And his beautiful daughter
Took it all away.
" FATHER DADDY PLEASE "........
Got exactly what he asked
She shot him down
And kicked his *****.
No longer was she weak
This ******** wasn't going to continue
Blew out his brains and cut off his balls
For all the world to see.
Father Dearest Please
No longer took her innocence
She saved herself from his wrath
But continues to live on the wrong path.
Doing only what she's knows
A couple men a night
For some change to survive
She'll soon end her vicious fight...........
( if you are, have been, or know someone that is a victim....... please speak up and get help..... predators only prey on your fear..... don't be afraid...... stop this cycle of abuse.... and help change yours or someone elses life. GOD BLESS. )
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Alina
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2004-09-01 19:43:43]
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:03:06 PM AEST
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ALina, dearest one... I cannot fathom the words to show my disgust towards this 'disease' called your father... But I know what you are going through, for I have been through the same... May this be a part of your past, and your life be filled with happiness! Life is short, as we all know, but we must live it... I know that it's sometimes not worth living, but you must try... And this goes out to everyone, even to myself. Suicide seems like a great end to all of your pain and sorrow. But the truth is, dearest friend, and this comes straight out of my heart, life is a precious thing... This must have been a hard thing to do, ALina... Expressing your feelings on such a private matter is very hard on the soul and emotions... Believe me, I know! lolz... Beautiful write, and excellent flow! Intense loathing screams at me from my screen! I love it! Excellent write, and yet, devastatingly sad! I am so sorry for the people that go through this... Turn to God. He has all the answers for your questions, although He may not answer them quickly, He will soon enough... Peace be thine, and all my love! My greatest apologies again for this horrible mishap! Forever,
Your friend,
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:12:10 PM AEST
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kudos to you for chancing to write this, and not half bad i might add...
~Remy~ |
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by waos on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:19:40 PM AEST
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| wow.. kudos again |
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by Adreana on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:10:57 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written... very effective.
You're right, you can't hide from the truth. The best way to cope with awful things that happen to you is to spread the message of awareness to others so that they might protect themselves and others from such harm... I'm glad you posted this... ~Adreana |
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:43:38 PM AEST
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Very emotional write. And good too. I hope it helped to get this off your chest. I find writing about the painful things from my past very theraputic. I hope you do too. Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:10:00 PM AEST
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| This was so upsetting to me,I do hope people will come oit if this ever happens to them,I know this wasnt easy for you,but it needed to be said! Christina |
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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this is so sad I have a friend that this happened to just remember that you'r not to blame for any thing your father was the adult
you where the child may you find peace in you life God Bless you now and always
Freespirit
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Re: FATHER DEAREST DISEASE
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:02:39 PM AEST
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rrr hunny i cant express enough what i feel
but here you have
gr8 poem
however horrible the images in my head r...
love han xx |
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