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The White Scythe
Contributed by
DerPinguin44
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Heart races with evil excitement,
Beating adrenaline to the mind.
Shifting gears to beat the wind,
Could this be your last time?
Kill that which prevents you
From acquring eternal chaos!
Something beside you,
feel it impose dark,
Can you beat this new evil?
I feel as though my scythe is not enough,
Can I acquire better strength?
Appears from the heavens and the bright,
Brings my darkness into light.
My white scythe, bringing justice,
Just, right, and for the greater good.
But should I return to be free to reign my evil?
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DerPinguin44
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2004-09-01 20:22:04]
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Re: The White Scythe
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by waos on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:33:42 PM AEST
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cool, the grim reaper idea is kinda neat.. lol they have one in the sims sorta.. when ur person dies.. ya whatever, sorry.
good write. |
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Re: The White Scythe
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:47:08 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: The White Scythe
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by MsScissors on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:55:34 AM AEST
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| Some good language, but the theme is a little hard to stomach. and it's not as much the theme as the power trip. I would think death would have gotten over itself after all these years... |
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Re: The White Scythe
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:56:33 AM AEST
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To be death, a dream a wish or already filled, awsome poem, excellent subject and well portrayed.
keep em coming
Take care always
Kindragon |
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