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Killing Me Silently
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Killing Me Silently
Lashing out against you
This is the problem
This world means nothing
To me; it never did
This is the point
In the redundancy of life
Nothing is worth it
To survive
Not caring
Would be the bliss to be felt
Caring so much for others
And nothing for myself
Giving up
In this situation
Killing me silently
Is this life again
Killing me
Is what I've done
Regretting living
For failed expectation
I'm failing myself again
From the life I have made
I'm lashing out at you
To just understand
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Re: Killing Me Silently
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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Tradgicly sad,
so softly spoken
once i was mad
likely broken
i heard these things
with pen & paper
I admire your style
This is something i feel
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Re: Killing Me Silently
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:53:23 AM AEST
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Lash away, if it makes you feel better about yourself, then allow me to me thy target of emotional release.
Beautifully written but your poems always are, and so full of sadness.
Please Take care of your self as best you know how
Karl |
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Re: Killing Me Silently
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by emphaticplacebo on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:49:57 AM AEST
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| Love your work, I really enjoyed reading your poem. So sad, yet screams out to me describing your emotions so bluntly. Great job! |
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Re: Killing Me Silently
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:22:56 PM AEST
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Tomorrow
Is to far away
So I will live to feel today
I don't want to wake up sometimes
Sometimes words don't come together to rhyme
Tomorrow
Can't save the things that happened yesterday
Can't make them go away or go your way
Can't tell how I am gonna feel tomorrow
Can't tell if things will be better tomorrow
Tomorrow
Is just to far away to plan for
But I still have some hope inside
To spend time with you again or
I would settle for anything
Even to see you passing by
Tomorrow
Is filled with so many things I want to say
When we are face to face I will be ok
I want to breath outloud the words inside me
But I hold my breath in and I don't know why
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Re: Killing Me Silently
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:58:43 PM AEST
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| Bleak, yet hopeful in a 'watch out for myself' kind of way...beautiful. |
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