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Lost Moment
Contributed by
pastiche247
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:38:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting with my jam jar by the water
Amazement gazing up at me
Fish across reflected eyes
Sitting with my homework by the water
The softest whisper of recorder
Tumbling to the politics of life
Sitting with my lover by the water
Holding hands, embarrassed
Shaking in that voiceless land
Sitting with my children by the water
Stealing time from work
Years lost to doing things
Sitting with my grey hair by the water
Something new squints back at me
And then is lost
Crushed beneath the memories
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2004-09-02 06:38:26]
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Re: Lost Moment
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 04:00:25 PM AEST
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this is like a set of overlapping Norman Rockwell scenes, the setting stays the same but the picture changes with time and season. It is like looking into one of his paintings with one of his calanders flipping in the background.
I really like this. I hope my explination made sense.
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