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graphic
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:40:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you said my poems were graphic
but all i was doing was explaing
feeling like i have been raped
emotionally and physcally
my one thing in life has been slit across the throat
and taken away from me,forever
i was only revealing myself
to the worlds eyes
and hope they would understand my pain
and take it away by passing it on
but because im desturbing and twisted you blanked it all out
and open eyes couldnt see what they have blinked out so many times
i thought i could have poetic liscence
but all i can do is write happy poems
and pretend the world is perfect
but it isnt,not at all
its discusting and vile
and i spit at it
its full of mistakes and ugliness
and i can feel all the remorse gathering
and i can sense the hate
i dont want to live in a world
were they make me feel so unloved and excluded
i want to die
and be happy for eternity
just one smile would brighten my sins
but since the world is twisted and depressed
it drowns me into abuse
and as the needles pump me with toxic
im one more step
closer to death
than iam to be outcasted here....
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-09-02 12:40:39]
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Re: graphic
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:51:37 PM AEST
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| wow! another eye-opener. i think you're excellent at expresing your-self and the pain that you feel. despite whatothers think, feel or have to say. i know just how you feel as far as this goes and yourwritten it brilliantly! |
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Re: graphic
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:11:18 PM AEST
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another good poem here..Write what u want to write..Do not worry about what others here or anywhere think..Nobody should delete or edit another persons work..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: graphic
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:37:34 PM AEST
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wow, hard hitting,and powerful
pixie xx |
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