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Free Spirt
Contributed by
sunraybutterfly
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:22:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It is my time to walk away and I am ready
I am sorry it has to be this way honey
Time has taken us to this direction
It is my time to walk away and I am ready
Sorry that I have to turn my back on this chapter
But I have to start on a new page
I know that I will be back again someday
Just not right now cause my time has come
And I am ready
I want to walk down two roads at once
Want to taste all that has been forbidden
I want to be unforgiving I want to fly today honey
Spread my wings and be free
It is my time to walk away and I am ready
I am sorry it has to be this way sugar
Time has taken us to this direction
It is my time to walk away and feed this hunger
Soul searching the world to find some fun
To young to be shackled to wild be tamed
Can we take it slow cause I want to savor
Every sensation
Pen to paper ink to be dried
I am sorry it had to be this way but I did try
Free sprit to run the plains thats me
I love you bear always will and how I have cried
BUT
It is my time to walk away and I am ready
Time has taken us to this direction
It is my time to walk away and I am ready
Copyright ©
sunraybutterfly
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2004-09-02 14:22:16]
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Re: Free Spirt
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by x_midnight_x on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:36:06 PM AEST
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Re: Free Spirt
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:51:39 PM AEST
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I love this . . . there're a lot of poems on a topic similar to this out there, and this poem could very easily have succumbed to unoriginality and cliche and whatnot, but you've kept it creative, original, and veeery well-written, and I can identify (maybe a little more than I'd like) with it. Anyhow, awesome poem, consider me impressed :).
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Re: Free Spirt
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by Kazzy1231 on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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