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Getting in to deep
Contributed by
sunraybutterfly
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A controlling feeling of getting in to deep
Living in a dream world
Where you want me
You want my mind, my skin, my soul
I want you to cover me and take me whole
Passion like a wild horse running free
How the deserts must long for the sea
Power so strong it can crush my being
This uncontrollable feeling of getting in to deep
You pull me close and dont let go
Looking into the windows of my soul
Tracing my face with your finger
I have this uncontrollable feeling
Sensations that linger
Passion like a wild horse running free
How the deserts must long for the sea
Power so strong it can crush my being
This uncontrollable feeling of getting in to deep
This passion is what the poets use
To record their scripts that lovers use
Me the poet with her muse
Her passion, her pleasure, her secret desire
What would you do if you were in her shoes?
Passion like a wild horse running free
How the deserts must long for the sea
Power so strong it can crush my being
This uncontrollable feeling of getting in to deep
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Re: Getting in to deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:56:45 PM AEST
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*applauds* I'm really liking your poetry, from what I've seen of it so far. I'd love it if you could spell 'too' with the right amount of 'o's, lol, but that's just me being nitpicky and editor-ish :).
Well-written, I liked the flexibility (if that's the word I'm looking for) of your rhyme; an altogether nicely done poem.
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