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Ordinary Girl
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:41:00 PM in AEST
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well i can sit here
and i can sit there
it dont matter where
i was always picked last
in gym class,i drove
fast ,til outa gas
never had a date to
the school dances until
grade nine,i'll be fine
cause i'm an ordinary girl
i'll make it through
with no clue
who i really am
well all the preppy girls
called me a freak,well i guess
they're slow cause they're freaky
never had a date to
the school dances until
grade nine,i'll be fine
cause i'm an ordinary girl
all they do is sit and stair
but i really dont care
i sometimes dont think its fare
if i got something to say
i'll share,not a day
goes by that i dont care
what they have to say
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2004-09-02 15:41:00]
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Re: Ordinary Girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:07:54 PM AEST
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i'M slightly confused by the ending.
Do you mean to say that you don't care about what they say, or you do?
Aside from this little annoyance, I like this song, as the chorus lyric is catchy (until, girl) with good rhymes in an off-beat rhythm.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Ordinary Girl
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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| reminded me of little girl i knew once.....good work..... |
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Re: Ordinary Girl
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by AnastasiaN on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 09:05:00 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem, made me feel like i used to back when i hadn't a clue what i was doing but everyone else seemed to have everything going well. and it's the ordinary ppl who will come out on top! they'll all see... |
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