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Lady in the Mist
Contributed by
luinil
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:03:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Bathed in shadows by trees of old
Sings a solemn maiden of value untold
Fiery song to melt winters kiss
Now sings the lady veiled by mist
Fingers unfolding let moons light escape
Silver beams illumine resting childs shape
Still softly singing, cloaked in nights sky
The maiden takes care till morning is nigh
One closing hand, one blooms with light
New song of courage, as day consume night
Heard by all but the child she must keep
She stirs water to fall and willows to weep
Willingly completing an endless chore
Calmly she sings, returning to shore
Never honored, rewarded, nor praised for her gifts
Silently she sings, returning to mist.
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luinil
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2004-09-02 18:03:56]
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Re: Lady in the Mist
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:06:03 PM AEST
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a lovely and mystical write... missed your writes..
pixie xx |
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Re: Lady in the Mist
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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wow
just lovely, very whimsical and mystical.
your descriptions are the stuff of dreams.
Your mom must be proud. |
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Re: Lady in the Mist
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by freespirit on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:58:25 AM AEST
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I realy love this poem im sure your mother is proud of you keep up the good work
God Bless Freespirit |
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