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Turns On A Dime
Contributed by
jaeann
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:23:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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under the streetlight she sits
lonely and afraid
counting absent rainbows
missing the grade
mud puddle's her mirror
reflection's distortion of grace
counts her hours off easily
giving the clouds half a chase
dirty is her spirit
watch as her smiles fade
yearning for her rescue
today for yesterday she'd trade
nights of lights and glory
days of heels and lace
nothing's left of that other girl
not one single trace
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jaeann
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2004-09-02 20:23:46]
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Re: Turns On A Dime
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:36:15 PM AEST
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This left me with such a feeling of sadness my friend. I hope all is well with you.
Very well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Turns On A Dime
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:09:00 PM AEST
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| interesting write. =] |
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Re: Turns On A Dime
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:47:05 AM AEST
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From one person to another....how many times does she turn on a dime?
Loneliness? Yes of course, for your freedom
long past!
I loved your imagery....I could see it all very plainly.....and feel everything you described....I hope this isn't you......perhaps her name is Grace?
Loved it
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Re: Turns On A Dime
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:51:44 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Turns On A Dime
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:36:25 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, i love it
- Bethani - |
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