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The Nigh I Wasn't Alone
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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Away from home, away for good,
Crying to myself way more than I should,
Alone in a city, alone in life,
Keep running, and falling, and taking the knife,
Home isn't where the heart is,
The heart never was,
Never going to look back again cos,
Mummy's alwaus crying, Daddy owns a gun,
You'd think spending time with daddy would be way more fun,
I'm quietly running away now,
To get away from here somehow,
But no matter how far,
What's left is a scar,
From the night I wasn't alone.
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2004-09-03 02:05:00]
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Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:11:57 AM AEST
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| It seems like the pain never goes away, and its always a scar left. Good writing!! |
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Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:39:06 AM AEST
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a heart wrenching write loz. very powerful, you
continue to write more and more incredible poems
love always, dizza
xoxoxox |
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Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone
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by inoc on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:42:16 AM AEST
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great write
glad you are back with ypdc!
your poems are swell!
cheers! |
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Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone
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by Hakiokusaken on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:36:38 PM AEST
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This poem is written excellently and I like the way you put so much emotion in it. Keep it up good job.
HAKIOKUSAKEN |
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