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Eternity alone
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:13:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Silent night, Black as pitch,
My suicide without a hitch,
Just leave me be, It will be done,
With a cold hard bullet from the old shot gun,
No pain I'll feel still so numb,
I'll be ready for what's left to come,
Use my bloody cloth to wipe your tears,
When the gun shots gone the night will clear,
Elysium feilds will be my home,
Where once again I'll live eternity alone.
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2004-09-03 02:13:28]
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Re: Eternity alone
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:42:52 AM AEST
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very touching. never forget that im here for you
love always, dizza
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Re: Eternity alone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:34:30 AM AEST
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Re: Eternity alone
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by Hakiokusaken on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:41:18 PM AEST
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WOW.... This is a sad poem. Your poems are what keep me writting. Great write, you wrote it with so much feeling. Good Job :)
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