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My Beautiful Witch
Contributed by
Bruce
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:16:01 AM in AEST
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Last night I dreamt about a witch
which I have done many nights
How beautiful she was, as always,
even without the lights
The smile that was on her face
as you can see, from whats in my mind
A nicer looking witch
would surely be hard to find
I rode her broom with her
as she flew us here and there
My arms around her waist
my face covered with her hair
How happy I am, with this dream
just being near to her
In all the years I have lived
never a better chauffeur
To say that she has bewitched me
bothered and bewildered me too
Every single word and thought
would be absolutely true
So know this My Beautiful Witch
you have cast your spell on me
And in your witchful eyes
I know this is what you see
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-03 02:16:01]
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by Chrissylee on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful dream to have had.. and a great write as well all blends in so wonderfully |
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by thumper on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:53:24 AM AEST
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Nice one, Bruce. Oh to be in love. sigh. I'm becoming a fan of yours. I appreciate your writes.Write on, Bruce, write on.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by inoc on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:55:46 AM AEST
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It is amazing'''...,,,,
ONLY you can make a Witch Beautiful lol
yes you are an awsome poet....!
cheers!
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:12:00 AM AEST
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What a lovely dream Bruce she seems to have captivated your heart with her spells.
Hope you dream of her again tonight
Divine poem awesome dream
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by arden on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:55:00 PM AEST
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awesome poem and dream.
i really enjoyed this. very well written and interesting.
great job 5 stars
Arden |
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by shelby on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:55:20 PM AEST
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I love this Bruce a great write nice imagination you have
Michelle |
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Re: My Beautiful Witch
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:01:04 AM AEST
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Indeed "bewitching"
Another wonderful read ... keep 'em comin' Bruce
Nazmythian ~ |
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