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When We Close Our Eyes Forever
Contributed by
J_Ganey
on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 11:16:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At times, it has been so hard to hang onto my dreams
But for reassurance all I have to do is look at my ring
Looking around, seeing how much has changed
And I see only our love remains the same
Peeking through the blackest storm clouds
Like fire, piercing unholy burial shrouds
With the daggers of love, you opened me
And showed me the things, I refused to see
Seamstress of my heart, gently weaving
Promises of love yet told, still unfolding
Seeds of hope planted, and still blooming
Gentle kiss of wind, softly flowing
Holding heaven in the calloused palms of my hands
Sparkles dancing within your eyes, a prize so grand
The tasting of the sweet nectar of you, my angels lips
Summoning crystalline shards, from my eyes of glass
At times, it was so hard to hang onto my dreams
And now a song of love, plays across my heart strings
Looking around, seeing how much my life has changed
And when we close our eyes forever, our love will be the same
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J_Ganey
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Re: When We Close Our Eyes Forever
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 11:59:23 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading
this, Very heartfelt with alot
of emotion and feelings
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: When We Close Our Eyes Forever
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 12:34:26 PM AEST
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| This was so beautiful & sad,I really liked the words! Christina |
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Re: When We Close Our Eyes Forever
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Forgive my cliche, but I've got to say, it's amazing what love can do. I'm starting to think it may just be the most powerful force in the world... no wait, I always thought that... but I believe in it more every day!
lol... I'll shut up now. Seriously, a beautiful write.
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: When We Close Our Eyes Forever
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 10:11:35 PM AEST
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Nice Write Jason =:)
Keep them coming... |
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