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Sorrow Sleeps
Contributed by
neveryours
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:35:13 AM in AEST
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Sorrow Sleeps
Sorrow sleeps in my quiet breast
Resting there for a day when I
Made stronger from the needed rest
Or more immune to heartaches sigh
Can then embrace that part that lies
Apart from all the rest of me
That in its stilted slumber cries
For breath of life, to be set free
For while my sorrow sleeps inside
Im less than I have realized
The loss of soul and heart and pride
Induced emotions suicide.
So while I may not cry today
Form scars of you, will feel no pain
I wonder at the price I pay
And wish that I could smile again
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Re: Sorrow Sleeps
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by RavenShadows on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:46:31 AM AEST
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| This is beautifully written. Very visual and completely feelable. I can totally relate. |
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Re: Sorrow Sleeps
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by silverjade on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:54:56 AM AEST
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| very good poem, i like a lot |
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Re: Sorrow Sleeps
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by wiredsavy on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:37:08 AM AEST
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Wow*^_^*......
Very classically aesthetic style. You certainly posses the gift of expression through text.
Keep writing! |
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Re: Sorrow Sleeps
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by wray on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:16:40 AM AEST
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| Ooh nice one. Composed very well to flow very well. Wonderful read =) |
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