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Plastic Trees
Contributed by
Sparkling_Fury
on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look out of the window
The rain beats angrily
On the plastic roof
There are people on the street
Walking under plastic umbrellas
Wearing plastic mackintoshes
And big green plastic wellingtons
Their plastic lips are moulded into smiles
As they shake each others plastic hands
Water dribbles off strands of plastic hair
And so they dash for cover under a tree
I thought I could put my faith in trees
I didn't think nature would plasticify
I was right
This is a rubber tree...
Copyright ©
Sparkling_Fury
... [
2002-11-05 13:00:00]
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Re: Plastic Trees
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by darkkai on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:05:28 PM AEST
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| The one reminds me of The Beatles "Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds" I like the 2 dimensional thinking of plastic more Sparkling_Fury! MORE!!!! |
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Re: Plastic Trees
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:15:39 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading
this one, i dont think i've read
anything like this before
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Plastic Trees
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:03:52 PM AEST
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LOL! This is hilarious! It starts out serious and gradually turns into humour and the last line just made me literally laugh out loud! Awesome job - keep it up!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Plastic Trees
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 06:30:58 AM AEST
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| Cool! Great poem! |
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