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Nightmares
Contributed by
Overstated
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:56:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I used to be scared of the dark now Im frightened of it
An ocean of the invisible, a shark of death
A vision breaking, a moment fused
I cant be alone much more
I need a candles glamour
Ill drink the time away, Ill cultivate grandeur
And shed love; strip the regret with every sip
I miss your shallow touch, your deep lips
Your petite hands gliding through my finger tips
Your vigorous thighs and youre fighting fists
Pushing me away, away, away when I touch your hips
This feeling of empty; is better than being an enemy
Still, this darkness makes me blind to the core
I cant remember what you know and what I hide
I cant feel your pulse as I reach for the door
I cant tell you whats in front and whats behind
Still spindling, I begin to fall...
Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
The thunder among the shores
And telling you- its alright to a rapturous applause
In my shadowy skull were Hollywood
Played to a script,
The lead star is just misunderstood
Delivering his lines
That keep you confined
That keeps this picket fence around us
That keeps us embracing despair
Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
And living as a pair
Whats real and whats a nightmare?
My reminiscences decayed
These nightmares will soon fade
Then youll stay
Copyright ©
Overstated
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2004-09-03 16:56:30]
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Re: Nightmares
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by brew on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:30:51 PM AEST
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| What an expierence.,,,I used to make my self scared, so now in my 20's I am not! The things we perceive and think.......Great write! |
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Re: Nightmares
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:47:43 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written....
Can feel the emotions within....
Jenni |
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Re: Nightmares
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:01:32 AM AEST
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it's a incrediably powerful, and emotionally painful write. i under stand you in here, i know those dark and painful secrets that you can only tell through writing. i just i cuold write as good as you though...
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Re: Nightmares
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by Renstar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:46:40 PM AEST
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| beautifully emotional,excellent:) |
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