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Shattered Image
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Shattered Image
Thy reflection
It doth shatter
Into fragments
Of once was naught
Through the ages
Constant changes
Show of some part
Thy own image
Thy dwindled life
Growing vision
New found reason
For thy living
Thy life hath changed
Never was realized
Before then I saw
Thy shattered image
Thy fake perception
Because of the change
I found myself then
I hath then realized
I was whole within
Shatterless image
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2004-09-03 16:58:18]
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Re: Shattered Image
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by Overstated on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:07:26 PM AEST
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nice ending - very nice piece indeed...
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Re: Shattered Image
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by Overstated on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:07:38 PM AEST
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nice ending - very nice piece indeed...
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Re: Shattered Image
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by wild_girl121 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:21:04 PM AEST
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| hey i liked ur poem alot thanks for sharing hope to read more of ur poems
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Re: Shattered Image
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:48:20 PM AEST
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wow u were right about this peice being different but it is still just as good as all the rest,keep up the good work,later
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Re: Shattered Image
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by EternalNight4x on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:03:25 PM AEST
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| very well written and well expressed...it is different but I enjoyed it...keep on posting |
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