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my wreck unknown happenings Feb28 2004 part 2
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I was lying along the highway outside my van
The van flipped over on its top
Nearly twisted like a can
My body battered,bruised and swollen about too pop
Everything seemed peacefull and calm
The cool breeze and the lovely stars lifted me like never before
Blood filled my palm
Now all I want too do is roar
Well and alive, ready for lifes new challenge
Weak muscles now I'm like a bone bag
Young hurt and full of rage
Too much blood I need another rag
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stonedraider23
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2004-09-03 19:20:36]
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Re: my wreck unknown happenings Feb28 2004 part 2
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by wild_girl121 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:01:07 PM AEST
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wow did this really happen to you ? if it did i hope u are better now . if u need to talk my aim is GianticOriental.
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Re: my wreck unknown happenings Feb28 2004 part 2
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:25:36 PM AEST
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sounds like a painful night,sorry about the accident,such an awsome write,u dont seem to have that much anger when we private message eachother,well anyways talk to ya later home boy
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Re: my wreck unknown happenings Feb28 2004 part 2
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:53:46 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. i didnt know this could be considered haiku though... |
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Re: my wreck unknown happenings Feb28 2004 part 2
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 06:30:58 PM AEST
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Very nice poem..
God Bless! |
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