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untitled
Contributed by
priss
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:44:35 PM in AEST
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mouthful of expectations...
spoken,
regretfully unclear.
your response-
a night full of symphonies...
music,
i didn't want to hear.
did you really think you'd have all of me
and give nothing in return?
did i actually expect more than indifference
from you?
guess i'll never learn.
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priss
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2004-09-03 20:44:35]
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Re: untitled
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by Spike on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:35:33 AM AEST
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I'm really impressed. Well written, with just the right mix of venom, frustration and bitterness. Well structured, sparse but powerful because of it. I hope he's listening, but that's the problem, isn't it?
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Re: untitled
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by candysears on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:28:56 PM AEST
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| Good write...God Bless! |
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