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Now & Then On The Streets Of Forever
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 02:58:54 AM in AEST
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I'll travel the streets of forever
Writting Daisy & looking for you
I'll swim thru the B'ardo
Hoping one day the dream will be true
*
Only so much of me hides
In the somewhere recall
You people tell me I must die
But sometime, Think All
*
One time I thought none
The enlightening vision
Struct me dumb
& I lost all wisdom
*
I'll travel thru the manifestation of my mind
Writting Daisy & looking for her
I'll swim thru the B'ardo
Knowing I will find forever
*
Only thing is, time is short
& another 49 days
Is coming like clockwork
With a new layer of haze
*
**
***
**
*
One time I felt non-existant
The world was dipped in black
I was in a box
In the corner of a universe
With no stars
*
I was scared
& I fought it
The most beautiful event I ever witnessed
I fought it
I was struck dumb
Stript of all I knew
Strapt in the box
Being witness to the flow
An energy pulsating in the brillance
Of computer graphics
Floating like fire in space
*
**
***
Only so much of me has learnd
From somewhere recall
You people tell me it's not my turn
But sometime, think All
*
I'll travel the streets of forever
Writting Daisy & looking for her
I'll swim thru the B'ardo
Knowing I will find forever
*
Only thing is, time is short
& another 49 days
Like clockwork
With a new layer of haze
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rhei76
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2004-09-04 02:58:54]
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Re: Now & Then On The Streets Of Forever
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by thumper on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:09:45 AM AEST
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I like this. The flow and repetition are lyrical. I liked it immediately but I read it over three times to absorb it fully. Yah Yah I know, I'm weird! :o} Good work.
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