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Leave you
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:28:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In you presence I feel so neutralized,
Your lips are my kryptonite,
And you instigate my forbidden sight,
With one kiss Im paralyzed
Baby Im gonna leave you,
Leave you when the sun is dead,
You rape my mind everyday,
Thats why you die this winters day
Your touch is like cold steel on my body,
You feel cold and dead to me,
As you start your sacred lobotomy,
I know I got to get free
Baby Im gonna leave you,
Leave you when the sun is dead,
You rape my mind everyday,
Thats why you die this winters day
Im gonna leave you dead on winters snow,
Bleeding from every stab wound,
Thats what you get for raping my mind so,
On you, the flowers will bloom
Baby Im gonna leave you,
Leave you when the sun is dead,
You rape my mind everyday,
Thats why you die this winters day
Thats why you die this winters day
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alecfernadez
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2004-09-04 11:28:36]
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Re: Leave you
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:12:40 PM AEST
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Dark and troubling, this is a love story I expect from you my friend. Love can truly be a curse if it leads to agony of the soul. But then, I guess it wasnt really love in the first place.
Well done
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Re: Leave you
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by markie on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 02:43:19 PM AEST
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| If someone rapes your mind..leave them bleeding in the snow...let the flowers bloom over them..great read. |
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Re: Leave you
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by markie on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 02:44:15 PM AEST
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| You go Alec!!!!! |
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