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A Path In Which I Seek
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:53:37 PM in AEST
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I can feel my heart seeking
I dont want to feel any pain in this day
If only I could stay
For just a second of time in this world
Where life is just a daze
Only just a few little
Seconds of this death
I want to be happy
To show my smile again
Take these tears
And wipe them away
I cannot cry
Let me be
Leave me to be free
Let me see who I am
Lost once before
Now Im finding my way
Ive chosen my path
Now I am to follow it
Wrong turns emerge
But I can find my way
Through this path
I will find the end
The end in which I will be true
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:21:37 PM AEST
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| well im not one to read inspirational poetry, but i saw it was one of your postings and the title and i assumed it would be an excellent write, and you didnt prove my assumption wrong. the emotional outpour in this kind of takes away the inspiration in it for me. i can see why it would be inspirational, but i dont know i guess i got caught up in the beginning. at least you know that all paths have wrong turns and the like, you have a good head on your shoulders. |
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:01:18 PM AEST
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Summer I like this poem very much. You have a mind of your own, and that's good!
But let others help you like you should!
If you care to be happy, as you walk along.
Learn to sing a song........with the accompaniment of others if you please, but remember with others the beautiful sound of harmony!
You are so talented..........indeed! I enjoy reading your poems with zest and zeal!
Keep up the good work and take others help.
You'll be happier as you should!
Poetic hugs,
Lovingcritters
ConSue
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek
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by Luinil on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:59:37 PM AEST
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| i love this poem... your wording is beautiful* |
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:45:30 PM AEST
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you just continually leave me speachless some things that I have not been able to express you have written so well
Wrong turns emerge
But I can find my way
Through this path
I will find the end
The end in which I will be true
Your awesome so glad you brought your writings to my attention...u do have fans.. haha
theresa |
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:06:11 PM AEST
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Yor poetry has that lovely style
I love it
cheers! |
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