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Blood Bath
Contributed by
silverjade
on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 07:21:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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sadness is what she felt
the one that brought her down to her doom
it tortured her until her strength got recharged
vitality oozed
she saw the vital liquid
that keeps us alive
hers was rotten
for too much for her to be alive
and in the shower she layed down and cryed
for her life was slowly passing by,
but she saw nothing
as her final drops mixed in
she saw it slowly drain
down the faucet it went
she gave her final thoughts of love
and she finally was gone
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2004-09-04 19:21:01]
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Re: Blood Bath
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:07:24 PM AEST
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| well that certainly made me feel worse. excellent write. |
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