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SMILES DAY SPENT AT THE SEA
Contributed by
03614
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:20:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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The bright yellow sun
putting on a smiley face
Shines in its own form.
Mr Sun feeling
obsessed with the play-dolphins
As he smiles along.
Mr fisherman
looking great catching fishes
As he smiles along.
Mr fun blue sea
gliding with his friends
Up and down he rides.
Here comes the full moon
glowing through the clouds at night
In the midst of stars.
Copyright ©
03614
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2004-09-05 03:20:18]
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Re: SMILES DAY SPENT AT THE SEA
(User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:19:25 PM AEST
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| This was very cute. It was also very descpritive, I could visualize in the head your poem. Well written and i think kids would like this being a preschool teacher for 22 years. |
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