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...comparision to emily and ralph
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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any thought demolished
Obscurred into the night
I focus my eyes onto the page
so i can avoid yours
They're dwelling on me
I can feel it
Reading me
Realizing who i really am
a lost bean in the Garden
the garden that has been raked, and tilled over and over
and watered until the point...
of no air
stop lookin at me
I can't take that you know who i am
..self-reliance
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Jilli_bean
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2004-09-05 17:40:49]
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Re: ...comparision to emily and ralph
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:43:48 PM AEST
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an abstract moment, and some good writing.
~Remy~ |
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