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Don't worry little girl
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:33:18 PM in AEST
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Dont worry little girl, someday things will be right,
Dont worry little girl, one day you wont fear the night,
Don't worry little girl, the darkness will dissapear,
Don't worry little girl, eventually you'll let go of the fear,
Don't worry little girl, sometimes life is going to be hard,
Don't worry little girl, soon you'll be healed of your scars,
Don't worry little girl, he'll realize and he wont yell,
Don't worry little girl, one day you'll be free of this hell,
Don't worry little girl, eventually they wont stare,
Don't worry little girl, soon you wont have to care,
Don't worry little girl, you wont suffer to much longer,
Don't worry little girl, even as the pain gets stronger,
Don't worry little girl, the sun will rise again,
Don't worry little girl, soon there will be no pain.
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Re: Don't worry little girl
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:38:27 PM AEST
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"/ i know the feeling
good poem |
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Re: Don't worry little girl
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:14:37 PM AEST
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| well i thought the "dont worry little girl" part at the beginning of each line only got redundant through this. sorry, one of my pet peeves is being redundant, i cant even stand to read some of my writes because they annoy me, heh. you have nice rhyme and flow through this. i like how this has two sides to it. how it has the pain and the hope. i guess there is always hope, we just cant feel it. im glad your struggles are at an end =] |
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Re: Don't worry little girl
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by megan on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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| I think that poem could relate to everyone that has ever seen hard days. the others just dont want to admit it. i hope that he stop yelling |
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Re: Don't worry little girl
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:18:55 AM AEST
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| awesome, i can relate |
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