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another day
Contributed by
monophobic
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:06:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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another day floated by
i'm still dreaming of you
your still gone
so far away from you
although you live next door
i wonder how i can love you
when u don't even care
my suicidal thoughts
have now become my only friends
life is wrong without you
and my heart can't take this pain anymore
its been so long since we were together
but there goes another day
with you constantly in my head
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2004-09-05 22:06:15]
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Re: another day
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:10:18 PM AEST
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| excellent write. well with those thoughts as friends, who needs enemies? if life is this bad without him, it could be worse with him. |
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Re: another day
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:32:59 PM AEST
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aww such a sad poem,i agree with ess9,if u like him this much without him and ur always thinking about him,whats it gonna be like if u's date and he ends up going out with his friends everynight,anyways i'm not here to critisize anybody but this is truly a nice write
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