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The Cold Harsh Reality
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Duplicity in its best form,
When the truth hurts more than the lies,
Theres nothing left for me to mourn,
Its the end of all my cries,
Words that burn like a metal fist,
Scar even the strongest steel,
Lusted to bring the blade to my wrist,
That my numb body would finally feel,
Confession of a lonely heart,
Rumors fill my wounds with salt,
Taints and flaws are my own body art,
Corrupted thoughts are my own fault,
To suicide would be to run,
A coward, I always knew,
But a suicide would be more fun,
Cos when its through then its through,
Let Nirvana run through my vein,
So my heart can feel at home,
So I can sense an aesthetic pain,
And for once not feel alone,
Blood, always been a treat,
Loved being un-conscience on the ground,
Not being able to rise to my feet,
Just bleeding to be found,
Take my clothes, still warm, to keep,
Now hand me your dagger, soo bald,
Ill hold it high and rift it deep,
And begin to feel the cold,
My eyes are shut and yet they are light,
I see the morning sun,
Through my death I was given sight,
But realized I hadnt won,
It's a cold harsh reality...
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by monophobic on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:11:43 PM AEST
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| i have been a fan of your poems and i think ur really talented. i love the depth i see in your poems and how personal they are. i have never seen you and but from reading the poems to me, you seem like a beautiful person and i hope noone ever makes u feel like you aren't. hang in there |
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by Hakiokusaken on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:09:10 AM AEST
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Exellent, I think this poem was written beautifully. I also would have to agree with the comment before mine, I couldn't have said it better myself. Be strong and keep it up.
HAKIOKUSAKEN |
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:58:43 AM AEST
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very well written, there is much truth to this. It is a
"Cold Harsh Reality"
love always, dizza
xoxoxoxox |
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:13:39 AM AEST
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Your poetry has always drawn me to read, and this is no different, it flows, and roars with emotions, the images you paint are very vivid, I can see that you tried to win true, in your form of happiness, but either way it is all good, for you have catured many minds with your awesome way of writting.
Thanks for sharing and keep em coming.
Take cares always
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:08:33 AM AEST
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A very good write, but have never thought of taking my knife to my self......ah but to some others......the thoughts of such slashes...but oh well..those are what dark dreams are made of.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The Cold Harsh Reality
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:28:51 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. You have some really great talents. I have been there myeself. |
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