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The Trip
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I wish for quiet tranquility and peace of mind.
Long lazy days relaxing in warm sunshine.
Fields of wild flowers enticing me with scents so sweet,
and soft green grass to gently tickle at my feet.
I long for warm fresh air to deeply inhale,
and endless bright blue skies.
Scattered puffy white clouds, please...
to shield the sun from my eyes.
I want a cool crystal clear spring of which to take long delicious sips.
Nourishment for my soul on these joyous trips.
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2004-09-06 01:32:11]
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Re: The Trip
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by blackholesun on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:22:19 AM AEST
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| hey man i love it i can totally get a visual!you are good at uplifting poetry! |
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Re: The Trip
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:55:36 AM AEST
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bro thats beautiful! brought my day up...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: The Trip
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:49:58 PM AEST
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Again... just beautiful... where do u drew all ur inspiration from?
~Donna~ |
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Re: The Trip
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:50:13 PM AEST
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Again... just beautiful... where do u draw all ur inspiration from?
~Donna~ |
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Re: The Trip
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:48:10 PM AEST
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Sounds like a heavenly long weekend. Nice write.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: The Trip
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:27:58 AM AEST
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That's a beautiful wish, Laurabean. :) Short, sweet, and joyous with wonderful imagery.
It was like that today. It got up to 84. Very nice. I think your wish floated up this way today and graced us all. Thank you.
Tim |
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