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Unforgiven
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:07:53 AM in AEST
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I'm unforgiven
Why do you hurt me the way you do?
Torn down when I see the black and blue
How can you hate me when all I ever did was care for you?
I tried my best to be everything you wanted me to be
So why do you hate me?
It's only choice and consequence as you would say
I wont lie or try to be another way
It's who I am so dont tell me that I'm wrong
It's who I've been all along
She was unforgiven
She couldn't help the way she felt
Her motive driven although she felt the never ending guilt
His daughter's a sinner
He's filled with endless disgust
She couldn't deny it when he caught her fullfilling her lust
Her body black and blue
What the **** is wrong with you?
Beautiful inside
My love for her was never denied
Why do you hurt her?
How selfish can you be?
You will not learn until she leaves you tragically
She was unforgiven
They didnt see her beauty inside
Unforgiven
They wouldn't of cared if she had died
Unforgiven
And now that she is gone
Unforgiven
They know that they were wrong
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Re: Unforgiven
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:09:24 AM AEST
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Very sad and a crying shame 'cause as they judged her they were passing judgement on themselves.
Greatly written.
luv, huggs, mercy,
emy |
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Re: Unforgiven
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:00:45 AM AEST
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Sad and harsh, The evil side people that only see uglyness, rather than the beauty within, thats dam cold hearted, what they did to her.
Awesomely written it opened my eyes.
Take care always
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Re: Unforgiven
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:00:57 AM AEST
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| THis was really good, and so relevant to this ***** up world we live in, where people are judged for what they are rather than who they are. |
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Re: Unforgiven
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:26:13 PM AEST
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wow this is really sad , parents shouldn't take their problems out on their kid. im sorry that this how her life was but now she is away from her abusing parents. angie
it was still written good , its just a really sad topic thats all.... |
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Re: Unforgiven
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:13:51 PM AEST
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| I think its wonderfully written, thats very nice of u to have made this for her, im sure she would be proud, its a very sad yet touching write, excellent work hunni! |
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