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I'm Praying
Contributed by
sweetheart
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:14:27 PM in AEST
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I'm praying Lord, for your mercy and grace.
That the people will see that you are there.
I'm crying tears of sadness for those that don't know.
Lord please make yourself clear.
I love you so much I want others to know of your love.
I want them to see your not of war and hate.
No scientist could ever explain the wonders of your amazing love.
God of peace, please let them see that you are the only way to the truth.
They all think that I'm crazy, but God I know you are the way.
Faith is such a strong word, its easier said than done.
But, if we all came together to praise your name our hearts would be no longer cold.
When you come back and the trumpets sound, then everyone will know.
Every knee shall bow, every tongue confess, that Jesus Christ is Lord.
I know there will always be ones who will question if your there.
I'm praying now that you will let them see the light to your love and care.
God I know you only want the best for your children and sometimes trials are hard to understand.
But as a Christian I feel I'm nothing but a voice within the wind.
Holy are you in heaven and amazing is your name.
Please hold this world in the palm of your hands and let us all feel and know of your grace.
For if we make the right choice we won't have hell to pay, but we will be in glory forever and be able to see your face.
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sweetheart
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Re: I'm Praying
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by kyletycz on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:30:47 PM AEST
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well, in my personal opinion, i think that not all poems have to rhyme to be good, a good poem has an idea that is well spoken of an supported by immages and emotions, and i think that your poem has many awseome immages and many deep emotions, so i would have to say that this is indeed a wonderful poem,
keep up the good work
l8r
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Re: I'm Praying
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:38:26 AM AEST
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Amen Dear, and total agreement with kyletycz.
Another fabulous write.
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Re: I'm Praying
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by mcloysoccer on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:19:01 PM AEST
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Excellent Write, and I do believe this is great without rhyming.
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