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Endless Thoughts
Contributed by
horseluver
on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My mind is invaded by endless thoughts
Of how to take my life
My every muscle trembles
As I reach out for that knife
I have never been so scared
Never this afraid
Tears flood into my eyes
As my wrist is pressed into the blade
The blood runs between my fingers
And drips onto the floor
I promise myself that soon
My pain will be no more
The thoughts inside my head
Still running, they wont stop
I begin to weaken
And my tears turn into sobs
Soaking up the carpet
And streaking down my cloths
My blood escapes me faster now
Like rushing water does a hose
I gently close my eyes
And pray for death to creep
I collapse onto the bed
And wait to sleep my final asleep
Copyright ©
horseluver
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2002-11-06 03:40:00]
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:55:19 AM AEST
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Good write
It says alot of things
that hit home with me
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:13:26 AM AEST
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| Powerful! Thats the way depression can rip at the soul. For having never experienced it...you put it into words quite well! Great write! |
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:36:27 AM AEST
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Awesome write....Great imagery...glad it's not personal...
Jenni |
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by orgygirl on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:08:32 AM AEST
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This poem really got to me. Its amazing how you can put yourself into the very position so many of us have been in. This poem is an excellent example of talent. I'd love to read more of your work.
Take care. |
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by lost_word on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:30:57 PM AEST
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| its not easy writing from the stand-point of someone else and u did a great job. |
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Re: Endless Thoughts
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 09:37:49 AM AEST
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Why, why why do these sort of poems attract so much attention??????
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