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DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You know I dont want you to do it,
So whyd you do it all the time?
You know how much it drains me!
So quit it, alright.
I dont need your kisses,
Your hugs,
GET AWAY FROM ME!
I dont need your love.
It means nothing to me!!!
NOTHING!!!!!
Why,
Because you make me feel like nothing!
Wrap me up in wool.
Tell me you under stand my pain from school.
Well, do you know what its like?
To have bruising up your leg,
Coz you slammed against a wall,
And when you dobb, youre punched in th head,
Because of what you've said?
I dont need cotton wool!
Because you cant protect me any more
Youve made me in to NOTHING!!!
Now Im just bloodied and torn!
I dont need your affection,
Because it stands for NOTHING!
I USED TO BE SO SENSITIVE!
Now, Im just burning!
And nothing stops me from this!
I just have to face up!
And youll have to except it too!
Your little freak has loads of cuts!
And youve put them there!
RICHARD AND YOU!
Im angry, so get any way!
Or the fist will be aimed at you!
Coz I wont take this ****, any more!
Im not perfect, I'm********** raw!
This is what I am, except defeat!
Your little babe has blood stained sheets!
So dont try to hug me, coz I wont take it any more!
Why do you care now, you didnt when I was sore!
Its a bit too late for apologies, because I dont want to know!
You take it in a circle, love me then let go!
And my heads just being past, from pillar to post!!
I'M SICK OF THIS! I'M SICK OF YOU!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-06 14:57:57]
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by Hakiokusaken on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:08:27 PM AEST
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Great write, you can tell it came from your heart. You showed great emotion in this poem. beautifull. Keep it up.
HAKIOKUSAKEN |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:24:12 PM AEST
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iv never read such a true poem i kinda know what its like to feel that your mom doing this
You take it in a circle, love me then let go!
sounds like a tuff situation to be in . i hope things get better. im sorry that you hurt so much. angie |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:28:20 PM AEST
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Your sentiments possess such...fury.
But your emotions are true, so kudos.^_^ |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by iPaRtYiNpInK12 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:01:54 PM AEST
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You can tell that you are really hurting. If you really feel that bad living in that house then you need to get out of there. If you think that it would help to talk to someone about it you can always talk to me. I have been through a lot and I know my friends have to. If you have aim just IM me at iPaRtYiNpInK12 or if not write me a email at iPaRtYiNpInK12@aol.com . I will talk to you as long as you need me to. I think it would really be good for you to tell someone your feelings. Good luck. Bye
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by emospaztic on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:34:22 PM AEST
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Oh, Cry me a River. Build me a bridge, name it emo, and get over yourself.
-emo. |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:17:06 PM AEST
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| I used to fight with my mother all the time, and although it was nothing like this, I do understand. Good job! I loved your poem, its so sad....Great job venting! You let it all out! Let out all your anger and frustration! I hope things get better. Fabulous poem. |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by S_K_Williamson on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:46:25 AM AEST
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If you are writing this from your life, I am sorry. There are safe places to go and safe people to talk with. Please,do not jump from the proverbial frying pan into the fire. If this is a true poem you will have to make sure you make safe choices before you do something. This is an excellent write and I will keep you in my prayers.
Good luck and keep writing,
Sharon;) |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by Aika on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:53:55 AM AEST
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My dear ROsie! you are very talented in the ways with words and feelings. You write great poems, although they are soooo vividly full of pain. My heart hurts when I imagine you in this state:-(
With all my love, aika:-) |
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Re: DONT HUG ME, I DON'T NEED YOR LOVE ANY MORE!
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:39:28 AM AEST
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| hey rosie i really felt this one me and my mom used to fight non stop she used to tell me she hated me when i would come home from school crying about the kids tormenting me cuz they all knew she was gay,i hated her a long time,it will make you a good parent someday learning from her mistakes she made with you,hopefully you arent being physically abussed by your mom and this richard. |
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