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I'm Scared
Contributed by
krammy
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:09:41 PM in AEST
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I’m scared of the past of stories told
For history has spoken so loud and cold.
With no place to hide my faith is sealed
For in this world I live and breathe.
The wheel of life keeps a turn
Within this circle souls shall burn.
The past is the future don’t you see
Let’s break this cycle and be free.
Books are written and lessons are thought ,
But still in the field the battles are fought.
Journey marches and the masses follow
But with hope comes tomorrow.
I’m scared.
By MARK THOMPSON
JAMAICA W.I
Copyright ©
krammy
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2004-09-06 15:09:41]
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Re: I'm Scared
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:16:40 PM AEST
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great poem its really good.....i like the line
" The past is the future don’t you see "
it really reaches out to me. angie
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Re: I'm Scared
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by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:19:18 PM AEST
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WOW! This is scary,lol. I've never witness such a mass of talented poets in my life.(although 14 yrs isn't close to a long lived life, but you get the picture).
Such excellent scheme you easily control!
You're a great poet! |
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Re: I'm Scared
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:33:42 PM AEST
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My opinion on this is that you are exactly right. Life is not worth living without hope and for me dreams and love go along with hope. You are a very gifted man.
Rita |
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Re: I'm Scared
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:51:10 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Mark... Yes....with hope all our tomorrows can be better..
Jenni |
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