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For Toya
Contributed by
Alina
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You see him
And the pain fills your mind
He loves you with his sickness
All for precious little Toya.
And he comes with an embrace
To hold you tight
To touch you and pollute your mind
All for precious little Toya.
So you just fade
Into Holy Love's Grave
And mother doesn't know
Of his crazy perversions
Little Precious Toya.
But Toya soon changes
As the years go by
Not knowing how he did it
Or knowing why.
So with her polluted mind
That he helped create
Our precious Toya
Lays his body in the crate.
With the blood on her fingers
The tears on her face
Little Precious Toya
Turned wicked killer
For Toya.........who lost her Innocent Grace.
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-09-06 15:38:57]
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Re: For Toya
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by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:46:25 PM AEST
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| 0.0....AWESOME poem. although I think the affect would have been greater if you lost the name toya(it is distracting to read a poem and have a name pop up.)Maybe toya could be the title and you could replace the word toya in your poem with something else like... lass(instead of toya) |
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