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Or Real
Contributed by
emospaztic
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:42:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Anticipation burns
with the kisses
of discarded promises.
Everywhere I look
distorted perspective
looms helter skelter
pleading for an answer.
But when perspective
is all you have
fixing, would seem
to be the problem,
not the solution.
When remembering tomorrow,
the next minute may not feel
quite as important.
or real.
Copyright ©
emospaztic
... [
2004-09-06 16:42:41]
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Re: Or Real
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by Dreama on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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I really liked this! good food for thought!
keep up the good work =) |
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Re: Or Real
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by DragonLuvSong on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:00:22 PM AEST
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| i really liked this read, it seems so simple that i love it. but then again the simples things are what contain so much. |
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Re: Or Real
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:05:53 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: Or Real
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:01:18 PM AEST
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You have a very graceful, comfortable use of language. There's a fluency that is not at all strained. I like this one very much.
Andrew |
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Re: Or Real
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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well written once again,very good poetry.
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Re: Or Real
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:40:50 PM AEST
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U mus have the i. Q. of a geneus. I know that's spelled wrong, sorry.
u write like a master of the written word.
Great work!
U remind me of one of my really special friends ofcourse with a different pen name.
Still it's remarlable writing.
luv, huiggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Or Real
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by sammydid on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:02:40 PM AEST
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pretty f'in awesome
-natalie |
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Re: Or Real
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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| So emo! Haha. This was a great piece I must say that I understand how you feel. It's so hard to live for another minute sometimes. Or at least that's what I think you're saying. If not please tell me. |
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