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A trip to heaven, what next?...

Contributed by 03614 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

On my bed at night
I dreamed about God
holding onto my pillow tight
I saw angels coming towards me like flood

At a moment, I prayed for blessing
and God said, 'It is given to you as you want'
then a little while, I prayed for mercy
then He gave me as many as I cannot count

I looked up and there again He was
marvelously glowing in the dark
Sweetly He smiled at me 'cause,
it meant that whatever I need from Him, I won't lack

Then I keenly stood up and kept walking
down the shiny road filled with milk and honey
I saw angels and ministers busy with with themselves,
some were busy talking
then I wondered what might be happening right there
in hell, the everlasting flame,burning

Then here I am, a room filled with holy men
wearing complete white gown
tied around their waist are ropes, then
worshiping, and on their heads, they bow down

Next, I found myself amongst little children
filled with smiles, gentle and tender faces
The calm and modest God-sent
filled with abundant earthly cases

After, my eyes ran through the old
spiritually looking as good as new
there old, wrinkled faces suddenly took its mold
their surroundings looked like morning dew

As I step out, a wide gate opened
a bright light filled the atmosphere, the air
then something happened
a bunch or group of people running like hare

They happen to all dress in black
everything changed after few steps (forward)
and I went completely ignorant and blank
after a whole lot of thoughts, behind and not only,
around me, they all loudly wept

Straight away, I knew it was hell
I don't know what to do anymore, sure,
I don't want to take a sad walk,
I just want to hear the welcome back sound of the bell
By sudden, in front of me appeared a very large rock
It gripped me, another new long journey!

Copyright © 03614 ... [ 2004-09-06 23:01:47]
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