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Clouds
Contributed by
poetmarie
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Whispy blankets
Cover the sky
Flirting with sunlight
Tease
Lords of rain
Lords of thunder
Hovering
Invading
Welcomed
Not
Shape-shifters
Omens
Soft
Loud
Cotton
Clouds
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poetmarie
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2004-09-07 15:49:53]
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Re: Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:41:07 PM AEST
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I appreciate the way you associated 'invasion' with inclement weather systems - this lends to the drama of what is, in reality, a very short, but quite descriptive work. Which I like.
Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Clouds
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:42:25 AM AEST
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| beautiful. it rolls of the tongue so sweetly. i must admit i am jealous of your talent. you are magnificent. |
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