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What it's like to Die
Contributed by
EmoDCgirl36
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to be left alone
I want to be free.
Alas those things aren't meant to be.
People try to fight the hardships of this life
To only find that Death is another journey of sadness.
Tears burned by the fires of Hell.
Freedom is just a tease.
Love can be bought but never loved.
I wish this endless fault would stop
Watching, waiting, hesitating.
With the love I hold forever.
Waiting, Watching, Hesitating.
I want to plunge it when I'm sorrowed and weary.
Waiting, Watching, Hesitating.
I'm ready now.
Watching, waiting, do not hesitate.
Keep your cool and dream of it.
Dream of your love as it draws a heart
Paint it red leave it there.
Hang it on myself like pride.
Dizzy, light, dying happy.
Now I feel loved.
Copyright ©
EmoDCgirl36
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2004-09-07 19:04:18]
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Re: What it's like to Die
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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| Good poem, i almost came to tears when i read it, cause it reminds me so much of how i feel, but it was good. |
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Re: What it's like to Die
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:24:56 PM AEST
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| interesting and emotional write. |
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Re: What it's like to Die
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by tabby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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beautiful, emotive poem.
Laura
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Re: What it's like to Die
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:12:59 PM AEST
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That was pretty awesome...It's a lot like I felt when my ex broke up with me...I'd say your poems ARE good enough for this site
Mason |
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Re: What it's like to Die
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:40:55 PM AEST
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| mason you are right. she is pretty good. a little spaztic, but that will pass the more she writes. so all in all, you are pretty good, emodcgirl36. good write. |
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