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Every Day's Story
Contributed by
versifier
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Every decade is a phase
When counting each and everyday
A temporary stage
A forlorn way
Of life in flawed conditions
Too few attempted revisions
Of faults made in the moment
Excessive do(s) then dont(s)
Mistakes!
-not once-
noted.
Seems everyone is keeping score
Of who did this or that.
Running around in a vicious fit
Forgetting to stay phat-
Losing their cool
Becoming such fools
In a pool of their created commotions-
Blinded by fame
Dubbed insane
Made senseless by eerie convulsions-
Seriously maimed
Yet few afraid
Of their corrupt and dreary devotions-
Scantly clad
Yet unashamed
Of the imperfections that weve noticed-
Believing the bogus
Ignoring the truths
Of the once heart felt communion-
While self-complacency is at its best
When all is forcefully soundless-
Never does life have remorse
For the many whom seen its glory
Not to put your mind in worry
For this is the quote of every days story.
Timothy Parris
Copyright ©
versifier
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2004-09-07 19:41:02]
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Re: Every Day's Story
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:22:32 PM AEST
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| excellent write with rhymes and flow. |
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Re: Every Day's Story
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:29:22 AM AEST
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| awesome, great write, so true... |
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Re: Every Day's Story
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:34:17 AM AEST
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| beautiful and true. i think you should publish your works; you're really good! again, nice flow, and i felt a lot of emotion in this one. i really like it. |
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