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Closer
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:20:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Playing pool with a rope
Taste of bacardi and smokes
Too drunk to cope
Trying to keep time
To nine, inch nails
I'll get through
Poundaway and hopr
I can hold back the puke
'Till she's through
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Re: Closer
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:33:11 AM AEST
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"Closer" is the song (?) that turned me on to NIN. Love it, nasty as it is. ;o) Um as far as the write, definately gritty, and hope you made it!
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Closer
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by screwup on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:54:23 AM AEST
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| HOLY CRAP... I was just singing that song when I saw your post. HAHA THAT IS HILARIOUS...great write by the way, and NIN kicks a**!!! |
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Re: Closer
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:07:12 PM AEST
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ahhhh...bacardi!! I hope you held back the puke!! or shed be very angry!!!! Great write!
mckayla |
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Re: Closer
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by Shanz33 on
Sunday, 13th November 2011 @ 06:55:19 AM AEST
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| Very unique...Well done! |
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