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When You Look At Me
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When you look at me
with those shining blue eyes
you touch something beneath
something I can't describe
It's sharp and it pains
then you kiss me again
and suddenly i feel myself floating away
How did you know
that I'd let it all go
The moment I felt your heart beat for me?
When your blue eyes fall upon mine
I can only whisper I love you inside
because the calming way you're holding me this time
makes the right words so hard to find
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AnastasiaN
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2004-09-08 10:37:06]
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:17:57 PM AEST
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Awwww, this is very sweet.
I have to wonder what it would have looked like as two stanza's though.
Otherwise great write, Phil xxx |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:43:59 PM AEST
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| lovely write, romantic. |
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Re: When You Look At Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:46:51 PM AEST
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| Aaawww! This is so sweet! Great job on your poem! |
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