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Come to Me Dreamer
Contributed by
luinil
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:10:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Come to me dreamer,
Come in the dawn
Show me your fire
And turn the sky on
Rouse up delusion
Break peaceful trance
Sing out to trees
And make the green dance
Come to me dreamer,
Come in the day
Soak gazes with sunlight
Breathe wind and give sway
Release hidden course
Show the path hell take
Guide here the wanderer
And allay my souls ache
Come to me dreamer,
Come in the twilight
Reward my tranquility
Ere I suffer night
Calm the woods song
Till treading draws near
Bleed me a river
Till water falls clear
Come to me dreamer
Come now in the dark
Douse somber stars
No mirth now to hark
Wait not for morning
Nor hopes warm embrace
Sleep now never waking
Never touching your face
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luinil
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2004-09-08 11:10:34]
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Re: Come to Me Dreamer
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:39:26 AM AEST
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a beautiful write about insomnia, great expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: Come to Me Dreamer
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:14:19 PM AEST
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*Kicks insomnia*
I hate it. lol.
The poem on the other hand, is brilliant.
It has a perfect flow and i love the first two lines always start with 'Come'
Great write, Phil xxx |
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Re: Come to Me Dreamer
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:47:59 PM AEST
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Love it.
I know insomnia intimately - have written much in it's influence. |
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Re: Come to Me Dreamer
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by momentoftruth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:23:03 PM AEST
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| Another beautiful poem-you are very talented and I enjoy reading each and every one of your poems. |
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