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I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:12:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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...I dont know how much I want to die
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I forgot about the great soreness,
From after you shred.
And I forgot about the confusion,
That I always used to get.
And now that Ive got it back,
I feel so dead.
. And Im so numbed up,
That I havent eaten yet
And for some other reason,
I keep on getting pumped up with tears.
I dont cry,
I just hold in those BLACK fears
I cant move my arm too much,
Because it really hurts!
Ive been keeping it all clean and stuff,
To remove all the excess dirt
But one final last thing,
Thats kept solid in my mind,
Is that, when Ive finished this, Ive promised my-self,
Ill walk away and commit suicide!
Mike, really did my head in!
He says that Im just playing games!!
So when I die, mike! Read this book!
And then youll get why Im in pain!
I AM TWISTED!
I AM MUCKED!
AND THE TRUTH WILL ALWAYS REMAIN!!
I AM BROKEN,
AND MY LIFE SUCKS,
BECAUSE I live,
INSIDE MY STAIN!!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-09-08 11:12:21]
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Re: I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:11:36 PM AEST
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Wow O_O
Hunni, do you wanna talk about this?
This is...angry...
Look, don't do anything OK?
Talk, please?
I'm here always, PM me or anything.
Many hugs,
Phil xxx |
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Re: I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:51:07 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is powerful and tragic. I hope you can find hope and know we here at YPDC are here for you. Find new hope - hmmmm - new chapter in your writing, and in your life? |
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Re: I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:44:56 PM AEST
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| Look, I know life can be hard, and you can feel that death is the only way to get back at some people, but its not! There are many other ways! You can talk to me if you need to, but please, there are so many other ways that you can deal with this! I hope you can find people to talk with here so that you can find some helpful support to deal with this, trust me, there are many other ways then suicide! If you want to talk, I am here, just so you know that... |
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Re: I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:55:16 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write |
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Re: I LIVE INSIDE MY STAIN!
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:53:12 PM AEST
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| interesting write rosie. well some things change, and some things never do. hopefully they will change for the better for you. |
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