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Without Your Smile
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Without your smile,
Life wouldnt be worthwhile,
You add wonder into my world,
I am your princess, your special girl.
To have you with me is all I need,
Without you my eyes will bleed,
Id feel like Id been ripped into two,
Youre for me, like Im for you.
Thoughts are filled by you & me,
Together feeling happy & free,
Your heart beats in tune with mine,
Our entwined stars brightly shine.
Your love is something I cherish,
I will not let it ever perish,
Care & attention I will pay,
Make sure it blooms every day.
I can see your face in my mind,
Your smile so loving & so kind,
Never do I want to be without,
I love you, you love me there is no doubt.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-08 12:27:28]
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Re: Without Your Smile
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:03:05 PM AEST
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| This is lovely and you're lucky. |
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Re: Without Your Smile
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:19:39 PM AEST
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this was totally awesome loved and enjoyed it. Damn girl your so lucky. Hopefully I'll get lucky like that sooner or later.
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Re: Without Your Smile
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:56:35 PM AEST
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I absolutely love the last 2 phrases
I wish I wrote them lol
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Re: Without Your Smile
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:06:16 AM AEST
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Awh this is sweet what a beautiful endearing write. Lovely work Krissie.
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