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Can't Win
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:17:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I just cant win, cant do anything right,
Im losing this stupid, lifelong fight.
Im pathetic, stupid, useless waste of space,
You tell me this all day long right to my face.
Cant take it anymore, just want to quit,
Dont want to go on, Im sick of this ****.
Give me on reason why I shouldnt die now,
Only problem is that I dont know how.
The swish of a blade, the pull of a trigger,
These are too easy is what I figure.
Should I quit, or should I continue?
Should I die, or should I survive?
Should I end it all with the cut of a vain?
These are the questions that run through my brain.
Whats the point? Why am I here?
Why cant I just die and end this fear?
I want it to be over, I want it to end,
I just want to leave, just want to be dead.
But Im not going to quit, never going to stop,
I could not give a **** if dead I drop.
I will not be beaten, I will prevail,
I will not lose, I will not fail.
You think I quit, but Im not through,
I will have my glory, I will beat you.
Just when Im down, I get my second wind,
I will last, I will survive to the very end.
Im stronger than you think, stronger than you know,
Unfortunately, rarely do I let it show.
Say what you want, see if I care,
Im not going to quit, not even going to dare.
I will live, I will continue to fight,
From the dawn of day, till the dead of night.
Copyright ©
Kevin
... [
2004-09-08 18:17:05]
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Re: Can't Win
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by essab88 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:27:13 PM AEST
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| great great great poem Kevin. it expressses so much and it was presented wonderfully. Even if it did seem like a sucide poem thats ok too. |
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Re: Can't Win
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by luna_mica on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:02:21 PM AEST
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| very nice. its so much like some of mine. i like the emotion you put into this one. great poem. |
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Re: Can't Win
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:01:09 PM AEST
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| ::applauds:: amazing write. too bad most of my suicide poetry dont exactly have a cheery or inspirational ending, heh. this piece had emotion, rhyme, rhythm, concept, and inspiration, hrm, i feel a tad bit jealous of your talent. keep up the excellent work. |
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