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just not a game
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:40:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wan't take it anymore,
so now your out of the door,
lies, and made up stories doesn't suite,
that's the truth and let it be
friendship was suppose to last
and should have been a great blast
you stub me in the back
and made my world black
inset of you letting me be me
you sealed my heart and threw away the key
I want things to change
let's stare a new page
let's just put all this in the past
and let it be for the best
friensheip is not a game
and doesn't always ends the same
friendship is not a game you just won
it is the person that makes it number one
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bebe20071
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2004-09-08 18:40:32]
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Re: just not a game
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:12:18 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: just not a game
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:50:42 PM AEST
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very true
great write =] |
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Re: just not a game
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:52:38 PM AEST
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| the grammar and spelling mistakes in this made it a little confusing and hard to read. i admire the way you can move on and kick people out of your life, many cant, and because of that they are hurt more and more. excellent write and concept. keep up the fantastic writes. |
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